Broken Heart

funny no matter how much you love someone it's never enough

you can change your ways or meet them half way

you can comprimise and desquise how you feel for love

in the end nothing is ever enough 

they say that true love exists but true love is what hurts you the most

finding yourself comes through pain and hurt

no exceptions in the laws of love just broken rules

sometimes when we try to hard we loose focus on what really matters 

the time we invest in to falling in love cannot be accounted for 

we cannot get it back or get recognition for it it's lost forever

total eclipse of the heart as the song says total emotional breakdown

some people live for love some people love for life

some people never live because they are lost in love

we can search for the rainbow or wish upon on a star

in the end nothing matters it's over for real

in that moment we loose reality on what could destroy us

we say with conviction that we will never fall in love again

until we become blind by what we can't see

the circle of life revolves around us endlessly

for we are just mere pawns being played by the facts of life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/11/2009 5:02:00 PM
you are truly inspired! sorry i havent been able to read in so long. this poem was amazing as ever and i can relate perfectly. another fav from you my dear! <3 madison
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Date: 8/11/2009 6:02:00 AM
Wow this is great. Makes you think. Thanks for sharing. Jodie
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Date: 8/11/2009 4:54:00 AM
Brandy. thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:22:00 PM
Sometimes it is hard to please some people...you can never love them enough...well said...good writing.
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