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Broken Heart

** My 2nd poem ever, gonna take me quite quite some time, in comparison to the many great poets here. I'm a newbie and a beginner ** Broken Heart The pain was real only time could heal took away my breath assumed it was death So wanted you back wanted you in my life thought you would be my wife but I was young, I was naive it was only a process to grieve I saw you with him it was time to move on but it didn't feel right but then I saw the light It was time to move on and I did just that work, family and friends but no more girlfriends This was my time, a little down time work daytime and play til bed time no longer a care in the world No more girlfriends and no more pain No more trying, nothing to gain But then there she was when I wasn't even looking Eyes met across the room Smiles were in full bloom I've heard of love at first sight I felt it there that very night pain went away, no more grey no drugs but high as a kite Forgot what's her name cause I burned with a new flame I was in love, not a game I had hoped she felt the same Here we are, twenty five years later still in love, but keep in mind 'Love is patient, love is kind it does not envy, does not boast It is not proud', I do not boast The love is real, nothing to heal She took away my breath Will stay with her, all the days of my life She's my life, my wife til death do us part, and then the after life -James R. Lutz

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Date: 8/7/2019 12:36:00 PM
Jim, so happy you found new love but we never forget the lost love, do we? We sort of keep that in a small corner of our heart with all the other rejection pain. Well done!
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:30:00 AM
The heart wants who the heart wants; if you had settled for the first, think how miserable you would have been when you found the RIGHT one. Lovely poem!
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Date: 7/29/2019 1:40:00 PM
I am so used to using forums, and the "Like" and "Thank you" buttons. THANK YOU to everyone who offered me comments, it's so very much appreciated! -Jim
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Date: 7/28/2019 4:24:00 PM
Hi, James. Glad to see your second poem in a here. Great start! Welcome to the broken hearts soup. Unbroken hearts don't write poetry) P.S.: Don't hesitate to take part in contests. It sharpens pen.
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Date: 7/28/2019 2:10:00 PM
We always gain after pain! There's spontaneity.. we rise as we fall! You have the heart of a poet, James! You are walking the path of poetry in beauty! A great pleasure to read.. keep the ink running.. Blessings.
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Date: 7/27/2019 2:44:00 PM
My friend, you have given a great representation of not only love at first sight but also true and enduring love. Whatshername missed out and you found your destiny with your beloved wife. Love the closing verses, as love. loyalty and happiness all go together.. A fav...
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