Broken Heart

** My 2nd poem ever, gonna take me quite quite some time, in comparison to the many great poets here. I'm a newbie and a beginner **

Broken Heart

The pain was real
only time could heal
took away my breath
assumed it was death

So wanted you back
wanted you in my life 
thought you would be my wife
but I was young, I was naive
it was only a process to grieve

I saw you with him
it was time to move on
but it didn't feel right
but then I saw the light

It was time to move on
and I did just that
work, family and friends
but no more girlfriends

This was my time, a little down time
work daytime and play til bed time
no longer a care in the world
No more girlfriends and no more pain
No more trying, nothing to gain	

But then there she was
when I wasn't even looking
Eyes met across the room
Smiles were in full bloom

I've heard of love at first sight
I felt it there that very night
pain went away, no more grey
no drugs but high as a kite

Forgot what's her name
cause I burned with a new flame
I was in love, not a game
I had hoped she felt the same

Here we are, twenty five years later
still in love, but keep in mind
'Love is patient, love is kind
it does not envy, does not boast
It is not proud', I do not boast

The love is real, nothing to heal
She took away my breath
Will stay with her, all the days of my life
She's my life, my wife
til death do us part, and then the after life

-James R. Lutz

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/7/2019 12:36:00 PM
Jim, so happy you found new love but we never forget the lost love, do we? We sort of keep that in a small corner of our heart with all the other rejection pain. Well done!
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:30:00 AM
The heart wants who the heart wants; if you had settled for the first, think how miserable you would have been when you found the RIGHT one. Lovely poem!
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Date: 7/29/2019 1:40:00 PM
I am so used to using forums, and the "Like" and "Thank you" buttons. THANK YOU to everyone who offered me comments, it's so very much appreciated! -Jim
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Date: 7/28/2019 4:24:00 PM
Hi, James. Glad to see your second poem in a here. Great start! Welcome to the broken hearts soup. Unbroken hearts don't write poetry) P.S.: Don't hesitate to take part in contests. It sharpens pen.
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Date: 7/28/2019 2:10:00 PM
We always gain after pain! There's spontaneity.. we rise as we fall! You have the heart of a poet, James! You are walking the path of poetry in beauty! A great pleasure to read.. keep the ink running.. Blessings.
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Date: 7/27/2019 2:44:00 PM
My friend, you have given a great representation of not only love at first sight but also true and enduring love. Whatshername missed out and you found your destiny with your beloved wife. Love the closing verses, as love. loyalty and happiness all go together.. A fav...
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