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Broken - Haiku

Soft crunch, falling back
Watching the heat in shock waves
Pins hold me together.

confusionhealthintrospectionhaiku

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Elaine George

January 17, 2009 at 10:27 AM

Dear Judith, congratulations on your featured poem of the week. Love and peace, Lainie

Raul Moreno

January 14, 2009 at 3:22 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul

Daver Austin

January 13, 2009 at 5:46 AM

Yes! One can really feel those "pins"...heat! Congrats on this selection. Love, daver

Vince Suzadail Jr.

January 12, 2009 at 6:03 PM

Congratulations Judith, on your haiku being featured. Vince

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 12, 2009 at 5:59 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Judith. Love, Carol

Judith Angell Meyer

January 11, 2009 at 10:29 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by Carrie, Shar, Karen and Trudy. I'm always pleasantly surprised to find my poetry featured. And delighted with your comments. Thank you ~J~

Carrie Richards

January 11, 2009 at 2:01 PM

Well done, thought provoking! Congratulations on being featured with this haiku. ~Carrie

Sharon Winter

January 11, 2009 at 1:27 PM

Congratulations Judith on your amazing poetry being featured this week! Not a happy haiku, but I see it is from way back. Hope all is well! Love, Shar

January 11, 2009 at 12:22 PM

Judith, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen