Broken: Fog

All those years I thought I was sane, 
The sharpest tool in the shed,
I think I believed every thought I thought, 
Sat soberly up in my head,

Because every short night I’d lay wide awake, 
Rehearsing thoughts over again,
Of what and how to present myself, 
In conversations I had to invent,

And I clearly chose to ignore the blur, 
The days when my mind was a fog,
I chose to ignore all the signs I had, 
Befriending a moody black dog,

Now nothing is fun, people are shades, 
My thoughts are a little corrupt,
And the light in the tunnel’s a flickering sign, 
Flashing: “Lewis - you’re mentally f####d”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2019 at 8:59 AM
LOL Lewis, aren't we all?! I get a kick out of the people still have not seen the light... they are so totally delusional.
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December 17, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Kowabunga Dude. Excellent write. A fave! Hugs, xomo!
Na Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 7:21 PM
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing
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