Broken Dreams

Glass hearts shattering From birth to death instantly Stillborn seems to dream

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/1/2024 4:31:00 PM

what beautiful imagery in your Senyru...'glass hearts shattering' Your words are insightful, thank you

Karen Jones
Date: 4/1/2024 9:35:00 PM

Sara thanks for reading!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/1/2024 6:33:00 AM

Dear Karen, your poem artistically encapsulates the fragility of hope and the pain of unfulfilled aspirations. Each line echoes with profound emotion, a testament to life's intricate complexities. Your words are stirring contemplation on the transient nature of dreams. - Loved it, - Blessings, Daniel

Karen Jones
Date: 4/1/2024 7:30:00 AM

So glad you loved it Daniel! Thanks!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/1/2024 3:23:00 AM

Great senryu. You seem to have abandoned me.

Karen Jones
Date: 4/1/2024 4:50:00 AM

Aw Dear Victor life has just been busy is all! Thanks