Broken Dreams

Glass hearts shattering 
From birth to death instantly 
Stillborn seems to dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Dear Karen, your poem artistically encapsulates the fragility of hope and the pain of unfulfilled aspirations. Each line echoes with profound emotion, a testament to life's intricate complexities. Your words are stirring contemplation on the transient nature of dreams. - Loved it, - Blessings, Daniel
Jones Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 7:30 AM
So glad you loved it Daniel! Thanks!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 3:23 AM
Great senryu. You seem to have abandoned me.
Jones Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 4:50 AM
Aw Dear Victor life has just been busy is all! Thanks
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