Rasitha Ranasinghe Poet Tetractys

Broken Dreams

Chill
current
rushes and 
fills heart with pain
dripping from the eye lids, fresh maiden tears
drizzling from the heart, many broken dreams
fragile they are 
drifting down
burning
warmth.

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Syllable Count 1, 2, 3,4,10 -10, 4,3,2,1
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November 4, 2020
Double Tetractys 5 Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Newton Ranaweera November 9, 2020 at 5:08 AM A good piece, Rasitha!! I hear her; I feel her!! Good Luck in Eve's contest!! Rasitha Ranasinghe November 9, 2020 at 7:17 AM Dear Newton Arach, Thank you for your wonderful comment. It's really encouraging and appreciate it.

JC Brul November 6, 2020 at 1:59 AM I could feel the pain cascading..Keep writing dear Rasitha. Rasitha Ranasinghe November 6, 2020 at 2:03 AM Dear JCB, Thank you, for the encouraging comment. Means a lot to me.