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Broken Dreams

Chill current rushes and fills heart with pain dripping from the eye lids, fresh maiden tears drizzling from the heart, many broken dreams fragile they are drifting down burning warmth. Picture 2 Syllable Count 1, 2, 3,4,10 -10, 4,3,2,1 http://www.howmanysyllables.com November 4, 2020 Double Tetractys 5 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor : Eve Roper

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Date: 11/9/2020 5:08:00 AM
A good piece, Rasitha!! I hear her; I feel her!! Good Luck in Eve's contest!!
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/9/2020 7:17:00 AM
Dear Newton Arach, Thank you for your wonderful comment. It's really encouraging and appreciate it.
Date: 11/6/2020 1:59:00 AM
I could feel the pain cascading..Keep writing dear Rasitha.
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Rasitha Ranasinghe
Date: 11/6/2020 2:03:00 AM
Dear JCB, Thank you, for the encouraging comment. Means a lot to me.