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Broken Dream

Beneath the infinite shattered night. The endless sharp voices influence in spite It clatters in chaos for eternal reality. Limitless and unconditional love, cease to be. Our future was closely woven with everlasting, Enduring passion; it all ended with your passing. I have become an island, recluse in a boundless Ocean of salty tears, forlorn figure of soundless Screams. Grief in sullen unbroken silence Looms my thoughts with your absence. Relentless, as I breathe, my heart falls bottomless To a pit of endless agonizing pain in darkness. 6/9/2021

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Date: 6/19/2021 12:14:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this beautiful poem, love _Constance
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Date: 6/16/2021 10:00:00 AM
Eve this is an awesome poem, it had to win, I am so impressed - but then again all your poetry is Shakespeare style - your use of the words provided blend in so well, no one would ever think that they had to be incorporated, such a natural flow. Congratulations my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/14/2021 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Date: 6/14/2021 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this remarkable poem, Eve. I feel your pain and sadness expressed with the excellent use of the required words. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 6/13/2021 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent yet sad poem, Eve:-) You made great use of the eight words provided!
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Date: 6/13/2021 10:30:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2021 4:10:00 PM
I feel every word you pen dear Eve. I think from heaven above he hopes to see a smile each day, regardless, for he loved you that much :)
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Date: 6/10/2021 3:52:00 AM
Constance will simply love this one, Eve, you have excelled :)
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Date: 6/10/2021 3:40:00 AM
So sad. God bless you with a win for this incredible writing. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/10/2021 1:33:00 AM
You did this very well. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/9/2021 12:22:00 PM
Wow! This is impressive writing, Eve. I found your use of the required words extraordinarily good. I feel like Constance will really like your poem. I surely did!
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Date: 6/9/2021 11:47:00 AM
You can feel the pain and sadness coming from your words, Eve. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim M
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