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broken chains

He tried to say, " I love you." 
In so many ways;

Through broken bottles, crumpled cans;
And fits of rage 

Doors that slammed, fists that rammed and  
Voice that screamed his pain.

He tried to say, " I love you." 
Again and again.

Between each curse of hate and 
Foul remark, 
There lay a spark. 

He tried to speak the words 
That hearts embrace, 

Words that bring a smile to 
A child’s face. 

Between his actions and the forces 
That forbade his voice, 

There was a choice. 
A message with a lesson 

To be learned: 

It wasn’t, " I love you." 
He was trying so hard to say;

"Can you love me?" was the message 
In the fire 

That he burned.
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