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Broken But Not Beaten

Broken spirit, Cold as ice, Last chance, To throw the dice. Pain beckons, Lonely heart, Missing pieces, From the start. Hurtful lies, Numerous fights, Shattered dreams, Sleepless nights. Rivers of tears, Temper's frayed, Pure hate, Forever betrayed. Scattered shards, Torn mind, Hidden love, Still to find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/8/2017 3:29:00 AM
Kay - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!
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Kay Roberts
Date: 10/9/2017 5:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Gregory. To say I'm delighted would be an understatement. :)
Date: 10/7/2017 8:49:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win, Kay. Janice
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Kay Roberts
Date: 10/9/2017 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Janice, your congrats are greatly appreciated :)
Date: 10/7/2017 5:01:00 PM
Kay, such an emotional write, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement in Brian's contest!
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Kay Roberts
Date: 10/9/2017 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, they're very much appreciated. I must admit, this is one of my favourite pieces. :0

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