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Broken Bread 

covered in pigeons

                             a man with nothing but crumbs

                                    peace his only friend








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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018
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Warren Doll
Date: 8/15/2018 8:24:00 AM
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A very moving and thoughtful haiku, Maureen. Well done,
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/15/2018 8:51:00 AM
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Thank you Warren, I'm particularly pleased with this piece, I'm glad you like it. xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 7/30/2018 3:18:00 PM
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...and with friends like that.....Maureen, there is a beauty to most everything and you seem to peek beneath the veneer of life so poetically....
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/30/2018 3:44:00 PM
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A beauty to most everything, I do tend to agree. Thank you John, I believe being a "poet", an "artist", is more a state of being than producing; how you see the world, how you be in the world. xomo :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/27/2018 8:43:00 PM
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If you had entered this in the bird contest and I were a judge, I'd have placed this high! That is how much I like it (just back to say that)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/27/2018 9:23:00 PM
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Ah thank you! You're awesome :)) I put it in Brian's standard for a whirl.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/26/2018 11:09:00 PM
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Pigeon n peace. I love the poem.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/27/2018 6:16:00 AM
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Thank you Anisha! :)) xomo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/26/2018 9:58:00 PM
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Really lovely, Maureen! Janice
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/26/2018 10:17:00 PM
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Thank you Janice! :) xomo!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/26/2018 6:55:00 PM
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ahhh, this is my favorite of the three.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/26/2018 7:58:00 PM
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Mine too ;) took a run at the contest but not up for being judged on my birdie poems right now xomo
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 7/26/2018 1:14:00 AM
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It is a good friend to have. Words of wisdom.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/26/2018 7:33:00 AM
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Thank you Lawrence :) xomo!
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Lyric Man
Date: 7/25/2018 10:40:00 PM
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Peace with crumbs is enough!!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/26/2018 7:15:00 AM
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I tend to agree ;) xomo!
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Sand Blown
Date: 7/25/2018 2:14:00 PM
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death in the park: fate- to be eaten by fowl
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/25/2018 2:17:00 PM
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Oh nice! Sky burial is the way I want to go ;)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/25/2018 1:05:00 PM
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This makes me think of an older gentleman I saw in the park a while ago feeding pigeons, I also really like the title!
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/25/2018 2:17:00 PM
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Thank you Michelle :) heaven forbid I ever end up on the streets, he would be me. ;) xomo!
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Silent One
Date: 7/25/2018 8:44:00 AM
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Sad imagery.... but peace is important..
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/25/2018 9:15:00 AM
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Thank you Silent One, I hope all is well with you my friend. Peace and love, xomo
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