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Broken and Bowed

timber ~ echoes loud
             silent treetop in the clouds
               crashes from its shroud 

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David Kavanagh

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Gary Radice

March 19, 2021 at 1:57 PM

This sadly hits hard. Another great Haiku David.

David Kavanagh

March 19, 2021 at 2:10 PM

Thanks Gary, sad indeed took a little while to figure out, but I’m glad I stuck at it, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2021 at 1:04 PM

- ... really "broken and bowed", David - If it's for contest, I wish you good luck :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2021 at 2:38 PM

- "One NEW Non-Traditonal Haiku in seventeen syllables or less" ... Of course you can use this

David Kavanagh

March 19, 2021 at 1:10 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I only noticed Constance’s contest after writing this, This one’s syllable count is 5/7/5 so wouldn’t qualify, better get my thinking cap on again, cheers David