Broken Afrikaans

die briesie van herlewing kom saam met u besoek

daar is 'n hindernis van byna 500 jaar wat ons suiwerheid geskei het

in velkleur, godsdiens en verhoudings
ons is van wortels gekastreer en gevoer met

godsdienstige ywer, gierigheid,
en wrede verkragting van ons voorgeslag

vrees nie die seë wat God stilgemaak het nie

die wind het gedreun van gehuil

of die son kom nooit op vir rus nie



the breeze of revival comes with your visit

there's a barrier of almost 500 years that separated our purity

in skin tone, religion and relations
we've been castrated from roots and fed with

religious zealotry, greed,
and brutal rape of our ancestry

fear not the seas God stilled

the wind muffled from howling

or the sun never rising for rest



For a friend from CT

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/13/2019 9:31:00 PM
Vegter, This prolific poem say so much of the modern world state of affairs. Entrenched in society's miasma. “I am the flail of God. Had you not created great sins, God would not have sent a punishment like me upon you.” -Genghis Khan
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Date: 9/23/2019 10:23:00 AM
My wêreld! ??Jy laat my darem glimlag vanmiddag. Hoe ganit? I wish I could actually read it out loud for you in Afrikaans :)
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Date: 9/23/2019 3:48:00 PM
Smiles are free. They are gifts shared that accrue. Be amazing the way you are until God give you something better to do. Blessings... Thanks!!
Date: 9/15/2019 9:24:00 AM
Thanks for the translation. This is one that I would love to hear the original being recited. I imagine it would be a powerful emotional experience.
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Date: 9/21/2019 9:42:00 AM
Truly appreciated!
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