Broken

Our days are broken The nights drag on How many have paid the price For your self serving song You will not scare me I have nothing to lose Moving ahead We will play by the rules I have learned from a master How to maneuver his charm Accountability will reign and decide the cost of harm I did not want this I loved you dear You became greedy without any fear And now Our days are broken And The nights drag on......................

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Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/4/2014 10:19:00 AM

From your verses,I read a few. In each of them I found a new Dear Poet: Ninette... What a Pity ,Broken Sun,Diminished Hexaverse/Lay Blank verse / Sensual Fool /Turth Or Truth /Ballad/Morning Dew

Ninette Carey
Date: 12/4/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for your approval. I find this expression of my hearts words a blessing!! It soothes my souls! Xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/4/2014 3:06:00 AM

Excellent write Nina! Very powerful can feel pain and sadness from a broken heart. So sorry my dear friend if you're suffering from any abuse in the past. Wish you the best. Pray for you. Take care of yourself now. Count me as a true friend. Okay. Love and hugs! xxx D.

Ninette Carey
Date: 12/4/2014 11:36:00 AM

Your warm words are comforting during this time! Thank You!! Xo

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/3/2014 11:55:00 PM

As a victim myself, I can relate, our words will one day be therapy for another victim, very well done. Blessings Carl

Ninette Carey
Date: 12/4/2014 11:34:00 AM

Any Good coming from this tragedy would be a blessing for us!!! Thank you!!!!xx

David Meade

Date: 12/3/2014 10:17:00 PM

A powerful heart poem -- abuse is violence against the soul -- we must all fight to eliminate this evil! Be strong and courageous you are not alone.

Ninette Carey
Date: 12/4/2014 11:32:00 AM

So True! Thanks for holding my heart!!! Xo