Broken

Are matches useless once they are used Can love be love if someone's heart is abused Can you love someone else, if your heart is still bruised... We are hurt, yes, but not broken... I wanted to leave her but before i could say it, I would start choking I'm usually a joker but this time I wasn't joking. She was once my queen, but I am no more her King. Empty promises and broken dreams. I learned a Promise Ring can turn into just a ring. So a broken song I now sing. We are hurt, yes, but not broken. So I keep my chin up and keep hoping. To meet the one I deserve. Give her all my heart, even though it's missing a third.

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Kara Fraine

Date: 9/4/2014 11:39:00 PM

Very emotional great work

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 1:50:00 PM

- "Empty promises and broken dreams" .... it's painful - but if there is some love there is always hope for forgiveness - A touching and sensitive write, Hani - Well done! - // Anne-Lise :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/3/2014 5:02:00 AM

A fabulous jilted love poem, broken hearted one. U wrote it in a winsome style. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/1/2014 9:33:00 PM

Your Welcome, just curious are you from Iran? Glad to meet you! I will be reading more!

Hani Gholami
Date: 7/1/2014 9:52:00 PM

Yes, born in Esfahan. Hope so, please let me know what you think of the first two I have posted in the comments section. Merci!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/1/2014 9:03:00 PM

Chetori Hani, this is a lovely poem, thank you for bringing me here to read!!!

Hani Gholami
Date: 7/1/2014 9:41:00 PM

thank you I agree, cheers

Hani Gholami
Date: 7/1/2014 9:32:00 PM

I am good! How are you? Glad you enjoyed the poem. Feel free to comment your thoughts on my other posts as well

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/25/2014 5:43:00 PM

One great poem of a love that wasn't. We all have been there at one time or another. Believe it or not , but time does heal and yes you can love again. Blessings.... Lucilla

Jt Nyx

Date: 6/24/2014 5:04:00 PM

Such a lovely , yet sad write. You are a wonderful writer, and I enjoyed this piece as I had the other. I will be reading more of your work. Keep your chin up my friend. Jess :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/24/2014 4:12:00 PM

Oh Your poems are heart breaking full of the promises of love and romance only for it to end so sadly and you are obviously hurting - it happens to us all my friend. Just move on with no regrets and just learn from the past. Hugs jan xxxx

Hani Gholami
Date: 6/24/2014 4:44:00 PM

To be honest, these are poems from experiences from my past. I am 22 years old and enjoy writing. Sometimes I think of a story and write, just because writing about these types of experiences allow people to connect. Thank you for your kind words again Jan! Much appreciated my friend. And stay tuned, the next writing i post will be full of happiness and romance.