Broken

Heart tightens, stomach grips Feelings burst Her smell... her lips... I feel like a ghost, an empty shell Dying inside Living in hell Energy is so low Body's fuel diverted to thoughts Remembering painfully All I have lost If she even cared for a moment Just one passing thought It wouldn't feel all so pointless But she doesn't

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2013 5:57:00 AM

good morning Steven, a sad world it is my friend. many times In my past I allowed myself to feel broken. living the everyday life where my loved one left me dying from the inside, and drained the life out of my soul. you explained the past feeling perfectly. like you time heals. I look at them days. .. Now they are all just pointless moments. ..luv...linda

Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/30/2013 6:14:00 AM

couldnt agree more, moments like those at least inspire me to write so others who maybe feeling that way at present at least can see its not just them that we all suffer the same at some stage and we always bounce back and move on,

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/24/2013 11:53:00 PM

A lot of feeling in this poem..definitely defining the title..Sad and beautiful

Steven Mitchell
Date: 7/26/2013 5:24:00 PM

was genuine feeling at the time but it helped to put it on paper ya know, thanks for your support