Broken

Broken windows, broken doors, holes in the walls, glass on the floors.
Two broken people with two broken hearts, maybe these two are better off apart.
For broken wings make it hard to flyand not all broken things heal with time.
For broken is not the true finality but in my case a very sad reality.
Still in the end I will be as good as new knowing I will never be as broken as you.

By: Angela Holcomb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 29, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Angela. Love, Carol
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June 20, 2011 at 8:59 PM
wow, very powerful message in this poem, Angela. I hope you got away (if this is autobiographical) Congrats on the HM. LUv, Andrea
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June 11, 2011 at 7:48 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
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June 10, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Lovely Angela, a lot of feeling in this and you expressed it so well.
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