Broken

You drive me insane
with all that blame
take your finger outa my face
you have absolutley no place
my face turns to white paste
you pick me apart
you bruised my heart
you put me down
and now I must wear this permanent frown
your voice I carry to bed
it echos inside of my head
where did I go wrong
have you hated me all along
I pull my hair
screaming you're so unfair
you tell me to leave
making it hard to breath
you push me away 
and then beg me to stay
you tell me you can't live without me
then you constantly dought me
you make love to me
then turn away
saying you can't go through another day
you said you'd never leave
and that I truely beleived
I never would have hurt you
I would have never deserted you
but you
you have broken me
and now I am left to collect the peices of myslef
the ones I can find
you made me lose my mind
to love once shame on you
to love twice shame on me
I will forever now live for free
this is the way it must be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/1/2009 10:41:00 AM
aww a sad but powerful write, you deserve so much more, he will regret it in time especialy when someone does it to him then he will know how it feels when shoe is on the other foot, its obvious you gave this guy second or even third chances or more thats true love from your heart, what goes round comes round, his time will come my friend, God bless you from diane
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