Broken

A complete stranger i am now to you.
You don't know know me anymore.
But then again, who really does.
For a broken spirit i have now become

depressionfree verse

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Emily Kroeger

May 18, 2009 at 9:54 PM

awww jessi you know I'm here for you girl. I read this and it sorta reminded me of you and me . just because we haven't been haggin as much as we used to you know?

Cesar Cantu

May 17, 2009 at 10:08 PM

In the end you know yourselve, or at least that's the idea of lonelyness, silence and peace; people forget about how deep the halls of the inner pot can be; nice poem, acid and honest! Cool! Thanks for sharing=) bye bye

Lena Townsend

May 17, 2009 at 9:46 PM

A sad write from one obviously broken heart. Not so sure it is broken in spirit as the Spirit continues to move through the writer with grace and beauty through the pen. Well done. Keep writing friend. Peace, Love, and Light be with you always. Smiles from Lolita