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Broken

How that night haunts my mind Splat My heart fell to the floor I'm sure you loved it Having control over me Verbally tearing me apart The crash that happened when our emotions met Boom Bang You broke my heart that night You broke me For even when I try to forget Your words appear in my brain Like an unwanted Unneeded Unexpected guest That wont go away Knock Knock I tell them to leave But those words Your words Are stuck with me Forever. 11/4/21 Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest Sponsered by Emile Pinet

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Date: 11/18/2021 12:32:00 PM
such an emotional piece Aubrey, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2021 5:37:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 11/13/2021 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations Aubrey! Your emotional poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 11/4/2021 7:58:00 PM
Well done, Aubrey. I wish you every success in Emile's contest.
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