Aubrey O'Quinn Poet Free verse

Broken

How that night haunts my mind
Splat
My heart fell to the floor
I'm sure you loved it 
Having control over me 
Verbally tearing me apart
The crash that happened when our emotions met
Boom
Bang
You broke my heart that night 
You broke me 
For even when I try to forget
Your words appear in my brain
Like an unwanted
Unneeded 
Unexpected guest 
That wont go away
Knock Knock
I tell them to leave 
But those words
Your words
Are stuck with me 
Forever.

11/4/21 
Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest
Sponsered by Emile Pinet

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Jan Allison November 18, 2021 at 12:32 PM such an emotional piece Aubrey, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin November 14, 2021 at 5:37 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.

Emile Pinet November 13, 2021 at 10:37 AM Congratulations Aubrey! Your emotional poem earned a distinguished place in my onomatopoeia contest, well done my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins November 4, 2021 at 7:58 PM Well done, Aubrey. I wish you every success in Emile's contest.