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Broken

She had the fixation of their closeness Ubnormally,her heart flapping from left to right That night her table full of flagons And every love film she saw was a hokum to her Her thoughts flipped for a not found answer And now thought she was mentally handicapped But all these hidden in a peculiar smile She hoped to get out of it some days She amiably treasured her old days,she remembered Contemplating about quitting, but again condemned the thought Feeling not contented with everything around her She was an avid avenger Every night didn't go along She looked the skies with the beauty of her eyes Though helplessly lying on the floor But she hoped to get out of it some days

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Date: 1/25/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hello Ashon Thee Poet, She seems to have a tough time of it. I feel sorry for her. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/25/2019 3:34:00 PM
Hello Darlene De Beaulieu, yes you're right a very tough time Nice day as well
Date: 1/22/2019 4:24:00 PM
I can feel the emotion in this writing. Very well done!
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Date: 1/24/2019 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Amber Chafer
Date: 1/22/2019 5:59:00 AM
Wow! This is amazing I can feel her pain
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Date: 1/22/2019 10:27:00 AM
So deep the pain is.... Thanks alot

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