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Tears seeped through his eyes, As he stood there, Broken by the lies He heard within himself, His heart shatter, Each shard causing him such pain His mind, Lost its grip, Over the edge, he slipped He cried, As he felt lost And broken by the lies As the rushing air was stopped, By the cold, hard ground And the end came around He lay there, Broken Broken by the lies

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Date: 1/12/2019 2:45:00 PM
Rafay, I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem, you do have a way with words and I really like your writing style, good luck and yeah I am sponsoring a contest by the name of "school time crush", you can view it by going to top right corner and by clicking on contest link, you can read the details and let me know if you are interested in applying in it
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Date: 1/10/2019 3:15:00 PM
Well-written and brilliant poem! :) I appreciate, reading your poems today. Have a great day! -JWE
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Date: 12/31/2018 7:47:00 AM
Very sad and well written Rafay! I wish you the best :)
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