Broad

broad innocent smile ~ hospital gown barely covering his pride AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Published in The Trillium Haiku Group Anthology's MOVING FORWARD, 2020 Posted on October 30, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2018 8:28:00 PM

oh this is SO good I miss your KU's so i am here to try to read at least five of them before I go off for the night.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/2/2018 11:19:00 PM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 10/31/2018 8:31:00 AM

This is brilliantly worded... ;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:08:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/31/2018 1:38:00 AM

And how wonderful you are there to help him

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 11/1/2018 12:25:00 AM

OOPS! I understand

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:06:00 AM

To tell you the truth, since it wasn't my husband, I just smiled back and quickly walked away. He had someone with him who would hopefully eventually tug on his gown for that little extra coverage...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/31/2018 1:04:00 AM

So telling. So empathetic. And proud.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:07:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/30/2018 10:00:00 PM

Tender and sweet <3 wonderful! xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/31/2018 9:06:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Maureen.