Broad

broad innocent smile ~
      hospital gown barely
              covering his pride



Published in The Trillium Haiku Group Anthology's MOVING FORWARD, 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2018 at 8:28 PM

oh this is SO good I miss your KU's so i am here to try to read at least five of them before I go off for the night.

Line Gauthier

November 2, 2018 at 11:19 PM

Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Rhona Mcferran

October 31, 2018 at 8:31 AM

This is brilliantly worded... ;)

Line Gauthier

October 31, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

October 31, 2018 at 1:38 AM

And how wonderful you are there to help him

Timothy Mcguire

November 1, 2018 at 12:25 AM

OOPS! I understand

Line Gauthier

October 31, 2018 at 9:06 AM

To tell you the truth, since it wasn't my husband, I just smiled back and quickly walked away. He had someone with him who would hopefully eventually tug on his gown for that little extra coverage...