Brittan Y and Josh

Brittany is the name of the girl that has my heart 
Right away with a smile and a stare into her eyes I fell for her 
I knew I had to be hers 
Thoroughly I thought about leaving who I was with 
Together we were meant to be, so I tried 
And now we are a happy couple 
Never did we think that we would be together 
Yesterday we were just friends now we are lovers  

Although we have haters 
Never will they get in our way
Don’t get mad because people don’t know how to shut up 

Just think that at the end of the day you are the one that says good night baby, not them
Only you get to enjoy the good times I offer 
So don’t get mad when they say stuff about us just remember 
How you get to be my only one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Thank you Josh for your comments on my poem. I think you are missing a lot by not reading and reading will make you a better writer if that is your passion. My best to you. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 4:59 AM
I enjoyed the piece. Nicely pennd
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Different..Sara
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