Briton Riviere Painting Christ In the Wilderness

Jesus Christ in the wilderness
All alone as the sun rose red
Fighting His battle of humanness
Jesus Christ in the wilderness
To save man~ Christ's devoutness
Although the bloody cross His dread
Jesus Christ in the wilderness
All alone as the sun rose red  

Written this fourth day of July 2013
About the painting "Christ In The Wilderness" by Briton Riviere
One stanza Triolet/ABaAabAB/capital letter repeat lines/lower case just rhyme
Contest:Briton Riviere
Sponsor:Isaiah Zerbst
http://fineartamerica.com/featured/christ-in-the-wilderness-briton-riviere.html
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May Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 1:29 PM
congrats on a fine win Sara
Haick Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win, Sara! Wonderfully captured!
Hamilton Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 5:09 PM
hi Sara congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
A   Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 8:33 AM
You are a lovely poet Sara, . congratulations... Luv*** LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 12:55 AM
way to go with this triolet gem, Sara. Congrats to you.
A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:01 PM
Sara, this is nice.... congrats... luv ~SKAT~
Zerbst Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 6:07 PM
This form looks challenging, but you did very well with it! It brings the wilderness and the troubles of Christ to life. It is truly amazing that He remained on the earth knowing what was in store for Him on the cross. Excellent job of picturing all this!
Carrillo Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 12:17 PM
Sara; Thanks for sharing this with us. Christ in The Wilderness is abeautiful painting...... Lucilla
Sivey Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Impressive my friend, This is a tremendous write Sara! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
Thomas Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Lovely written words to meditate on ,,, this 4th of july ty4sharing sara.....enjoyed reading:) holiday....Cheriex
Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 11:17 AM
most soulful and uplifting read, sara... you paint beautiful artwords in a fine form.... blessed be; beautiful!..:) huggs
Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 11:18 AM
kindly check sponsor's name....:)
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 9:56 AM
very nice, dear and thanks for reminding me I need to see one of those Briton Riviere pictures myself! Happy fourth!
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