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Briton Riviere Painting Christ In the Wilderness

Jesus Christ in the wilderness
All alone as the sun rose red
Fighting His battle of humanness
Jesus Christ in the wilderness
To save man~ Christ's devoutness
Although the bloody cross His dread
Jesus Christ in the wilderness
All alone as the sun rose red  

Written this fourth day of July 2013
About the painting "Christ In The Wilderness" by Briton Riviere
One stanza Triolet/ABaAabAB/capital letter repeat lines/lower case just rhyme
Contest:Briton Riviere
Sponsor:Isaiah Zerbst
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Joseph May

Date: 7/20/2013 1:29:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/19/2013 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on a wonderful win, Sara! Wonderfully captured!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/19/2013 5:09:00 PM

hi Sara congrats on your win Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2013 8:33:00 AM

You are a lovely poet Sara, . congratulations... Luv*** LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2013 12:55:00 AM

way to go with this triolet gem, Sara. Congrats to you.

Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:01:00 PM

Sara, this is nice.... congrats... luv ~SKAT~

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 7/18/2013 6:07:00 PM

This form looks challenging, but you did very well with it! It brings the wilderness and the troubles of Christ to life. It is truly amazing that He remained on the earth knowing what was in store for Him on the cross. Excellent job of picturing all this!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/5/2013 12:17:00 PM

Sara; Thanks for sharing this with us. Christ in The Wilderness is abeautiful painting...... Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/4/2013 6:53:00 PM

Impressive my friend, This is a tremendous write Sara! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!