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Brink of Beyond

tangerine slashed crimson skies
golden rays blink on the horizon
silence engulfs the sooty night
arise murderous moon
chase furtive shadows
meander illusory paths
of a torn and troubled mind
to the bleeding ruins of me
standing at the precipice
perilous oblivion
turbulent waters drum
upon granite rocks
ruminations, whispering torments
fly away, fly away now
loosening tenuous grip on reality
all the stars in the sky
see me wavering

Entered: Inward Reflections Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke
Written 29/10/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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artlyy Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 8:07 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 1:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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November 28, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Hey Georgia... no more poetry?
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October 29, 2020 at 8:57 AM
Love the imagery in his poem and I can feel the emotions through it...
Kereopa Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 3:22 AM
thank you SO for your visit and comments
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