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Bringing Me Along

You would think something would be there, rattling in your brain, worth writing down. And you would be wrong. Chills in waves, sinuses are raw, pressure on the eyes, cicadas buzz the ears in a monotone song. Pushing text around, edits here and there, delete key winning out, nothing very strong. Drag myself outside, Missy needs a walk, living in the moment, bringing me along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/9/2023 11:59:00 AM
Ah, ha! I have spotted 'ze problem!' In the very first line, the first three words: 'You would think...' Zat Zere is ze problem!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/9/2023 12:32:00 PM
You’re on to something, I think? Lol, hope your day is going well! I’m moving around, working outside today, it is lovely!
Date: 2/8/2023 11:41:00 AM
A creative write. You have the same problem, "delete key winning out"???? Hahaha....  Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 2/8/2023 5:47:00 AM
Yup, still the poetry marbles are rolling about, eh. Feel better, my friend!!
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Date: 2/8/2023 5:25:00 AM
Get well soon!
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