Jo Bien Poet Free verse

Bring On the Rain

bring on the rain 
let it beat against the panes
bring the lightning and thunder
as we snuggle and settle down
we have no other thoughts
nowhere else to be
as searching lips explore
where warm hands were before

you feel the quivers
but it isn't from a chill
and candlelight shines
on the treasure you seek
with each moan and whisper
with a quaking surrender
the monsoon that rages outside
is nothing like the passion in this room

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Doris Culverhouse November 10, 2010 at 6:29 AM reminds me of a man....enjoyed your passionalte write.

Sylvia Coulstock November 10, 2010 at 6:21 AM HI JB.You have set the mood beautifully, warm,sensual,and subtly passionate so that it leaves room for the imagination.I think this is a lovely piece and well written.I also think it will set a few hearts beating among the romantics that read it.Love June(Sylvia