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Bring On the Rain

bring on the rain let it beat against the panes bring the lightning and thunder as we snuggle and settle down we have no other thoughts nowhere else to be as searching lips explore where warm hands were before you feel the quivers but it isn't from a chill and candlelight shines on the treasure you seek with each moan and whisper with a quaking surrender the monsoon that rages outside is nothing like the passion in this room

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Date: 11/10/2010 6:29:00 AM
reminds me of a man....enjoyed your passionalte write.
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Date: 11/10/2010 6:21:00 AM
HI JB.You have set the mood beautifully, warm,sensual,and subtly passionate so that it leaves room for the imagination.I think this is a lovely piece and well written.I also think it will set a few hearts beating among the romantics that read it.Love June(Sylvia
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