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Bring Me Up There

Yes last night I cried out, for every little disaster feared, Tormenting my soul as it‘ll be there someday soon, I have shed every tear already, of what future beholds, Inner self craved to depart, but a coward behind the eyes didn’t let me, Can YOU not Lord bring me up there? So I don’t have to face what I fear, What possibly waits to be seen … Oh please I’m breaking every night already, Have mercy n set me free, They say He gives man the sorrow, Only of what he is capable to deal, Except You Lord, all I have is them, So I say by myself, assert, I can’t, just bring me up there…

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Date: 10/14/2014 12:23:00 AM
I can relate to these feelings of fear, Hina. I think everyone can, but, you can't let them dominate your life and push you to the breaking point. Please, do not give up!.... Your emotions were expressed very well here. Great work! :)
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Hina Nasir
Date: 10/18/2014 6:19:00 AM
yes its all about the mere words , im not that brave to go that far , thankyou so much Kelly for your comment , after a long time i guess
Date: 8/31/2014 1:13:00 PM
Oh, child...were it so easy...I feel your plight reading this. A very heart-felt work, Hina . God bless you !
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/31/2014 3:46:00 PM
thank you for liking n feeling it

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