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Numb yawn of early Friday crawls Through drowsy hours, a mind jangles It twitches and shakes from weariness. Void. By 6 am, my still world remains catatonic... Gradually, exotic birds ( perhaps) tweet An acapella of sounds ensues Including the cat meowing its anthem: Awakened...old robe slips down, down While I stumble on a jar tightly locked, Fingers opening its cap... robusta gig ! Vanilla scent excites caffeine madness Eyes dilate, mouth prepares for an attack, Caramel tinged with brew hot hot Sugar added in the name of hysteria... Espresso on the run, The radio booms! Cinnamon please...and whipped cream? Now the day brings in its vibrating dance. Surprise! Gather the warblers as I pour another round-- Friday, I’m ready to conquer you. It’s show time! 4/18/2019 Bring On The Dancing Bears Contest Sponsor: John lawless

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2019 4:34:00 PM

If I wrote this way about tea it wouldn't have quite the same appeal lol ! very well penned Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/28/2019 3:02:00 PM

Your poem is expressed with amazing flair, Nette. Every line excites the psyche and senses with delectable imagery - and such a grand finale! Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 4/27/2019 9:59:00 AM

The is a most enjoyable read! Congrats on top honors.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/27/2019 9:06:00 AM

Wow; delightful. Congrats! Ang galing-galing! God bless you!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/26/2019 11:32:00 PM

Back with a big congratulations !

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/26/2019 8:27:00 PM

Nette, back to congratulate you on your first place win with this gem! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2019 6:52:00 PM

amazing free verse, Nette . VERY well done! Take a bow. Congratulations on top place.

John Lawless

Date: 4/26/2019 6:25:00 PM

WOW Nette, such a different take for you. I am quite surprised as i finally find out who the winners are. Thanks for playing

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/22/2019 2:46:00 PM

With such tasty espresso you can conquer nearly anything. Wonderful. Good luck with the contest.

Carl Fraser

Date: 4/21/2019 12:57:00 AM

Mmm Friday morning coffee, best sign of the approaching weekend. Great expession here Nette. I enjoyed. Blessings Carl

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/20/2019 3:12:00 PM

Quite a start..' It gave me reading this from the half-sleep to a full leap, twisty top jar, jam packed untidy Friday type of a a write.' You Have appeared here..Wheew thats enough from Me hope your day is nice to be. Sure!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2019 8:36:00 PM

This sounds like my mornings to the opening a jar. You write such great lines of dress in many colorful images and scents in the air. Have a great Easter. Hugs Eve ~`*

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/18/2019 7:05:00 PM

Nette, love this, I can smell the french vanilla coffee, TGIF!!! :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/18/2019 5:39:00 PM

I love this "fav"; it's unbelievably great.

John Gondolf

Date: 4/18/2019 9:16:00 AM

A day cannot begin without that first cup to get you kick-started. I prefer mine straight up black. I enjoyed our verse, Nette. Hope you have a happy Easter. John

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/18/2019 8:57:00 AM

Gonna have some caffeine madness now...Friday is too long...Positive vibrations in this one...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/18/2019 7:37:00 AM

Fridays have a special feeling..and you wrote a perfect beginning to take on the day. Sights and sounds in your poem.. quite appealing and uniquely original. All the best, Nette.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2019 2:45:00 AM

It can't come quick enough Nette, Hope you have a lovely Easter. Tom