Brimstone Reign


Goodbye, *****Erectus!
Talking monkey with the rainforest tan
Bent knuckles scarred ...
low brow crouching,
and arched eyes wondering — 
Looking at the bright yellow rock
dusk paper moon burning
Green banana hope 
is swelter swagger of nuclear dawn man

Bad buy, *****Sapien!
Curious chimpanzee, ever tool tinkering
Tick-tock pages
of the Jungle Book clock
is mandrill turning
Loves the evol jokes
that a-peel knock  knock
Dollar sign rope
has the greedy ape treehouse a-swinging

Every Donkey Kong thing
has a deposed king Bonzo canopy end
Bray for peace,
using cold metal of an uranium blend
Baboon voices a-bellowing
Hot off the guerilla press:
WW3 hurls came from a prompt send
Brimstone reign
is Apocalypse Now  falling

Bald face lies: Hairless claim
of superior tech skin coconut thin
Grey matter descend
has a groping, monkey-shine grin
In the New Age of Stone vows,
idol hearts did bend
Specie extinction blame game
was of unknown orangutan origin

And the cave dwellers 
won’t ever know the genome source code
To amino acid awaken
from the ash entropy Eternal Sleep mode


This poem was inspired by the talented Phil Capitano
powerful poem titled, "Nuclear Dawn" 
from the brilliant poetry book, "Roses on the Moon"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/12/2019 10:37:00 PM
it's a shame they program blocked your words. Nicely done verse.
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Date: 12/11/2019 1:26:00 PM
Sayonara, Sapiens Erectus! Can't say you/we haven't been warned, eh?! Thanks, FRJ! :) gw
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Date: 12/11/2019 11:28:00 AM
Impressive my friend. My Favourite toy when I was a boy was a small rubber monkey I dubbed “King Bongo” I placed a brass ring on his head to wear as a crown. He was King of all the toys. ;0)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/11/2019 11:41:00 AM
Glad to bring back such fond remembrances, my old friend. King Bongo, eh. lol! Love and peace forever.
Date: 12/11/2019 9:02:00 AM
What a creative piece of work that captivates and lures the reader in. Too bad the asterisk police decided to descend on this amazing piece. They can gently and carefully stick those asterisks where the rising sun won't shine...in my opinion. Nicely crafted my friend.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/11/2019 9:19:00 AM
Ty for the kind, encouraging words, Chris. You are one of the unsung PSoup heroes whom I dearly admire. Love and more love always.
Date: 12/11/2019 8:57:00 AM
PSoup censure ban on scientific words is very free-thought draconian. The Romantic Warrior has dissent-fully spoken! Love and peace forever.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2019 11:30:00 AM
I agree. ;0).
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