Brilliant Stupendous Colossal

Brilliant, stupendous, colossal, I used to be called But recently my utter coolness has become quite quelled Perhaps coz my body Has become more shoddy No need for pity, brain power's still unparelled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Turner Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Probably just needs a tune-up, Jack. Just think, now you are a classic! As am I. LOL
Ellison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 3:29 PM
A total rebuild!!! LOL But I think I out-age you!!! Cheers!
Roper Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:07 PM
You are still doing fine.. Jack,, I was thinking of myself this morning and I am way younger :)
Ellison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:37 PM
LOL Oh well that's my self-diagnosis... actually docs say I might make it until Thursday! Problem is... they didn't say which Thursday!!! Lovsies, Happy Jack XOXO
Michael Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:18 AM
If you say so...a playback every now and then to shake up the body a bit...should keep you fit...All the best Jack
Ellison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:40 AM
Trust me, I'm stunning in my jockeys!!!
Williams Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Didn't you say in your last limerick that you are walking every morn? Well no probs then - and your coolness will never be quelled. Just don't quell your great poetic skill...Maria xox
Ellison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Are you saying I'm clueless... oh, quelless! Well, I promise!!! Love you, sweet Maria!!! XOXOX (BTW you have a sweet tender voice on the phone!)
Cunningham Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:20 AM
I agree your brain is razor sharp, never give up. Board unreachable re your salary haha, will keep trying. Good morning Jack.
Ellison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Well, I could go on strike again!!! Get back to me and suggest they better resolve the salary issue! It's my last warning!!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:51 AM
I believe it :) mo hugsies!
Ellison Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Perhaps I'm being a wee bit too hard on myself!!! I still look pretty good in a bikini!!! YEE HAW! XXX
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