Brilliant Bursts of Pink

Elegant portico columns, fireplace frame
Fronting tasteful, demure white walls
Rich browns -- pianoforte, armchair
Muted ostentation, classicism bespoken --
the eye startled, struck
by the clear glass vase 
on the mantel
stems ascending 
to bold-green leaves
slightly upturned
as are firm, youthful breasts
topped by brilliant bursts
of pink-streaked flowers
panorama
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Theraven Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Gershon, Here with a poem that placed us in the pictured beauty. Your lines never disappoint. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Richard, you are spoiling me with your warm wards of encouragement. Thank you so much, my friend. Cheers, Gershon
Green Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Wow, this was brilliantly colorful my friend. Such a nice burst of poetic color this morning
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:11 AM
Glad you enjoyed that color-burst, Chris! Smiles all around, Gershon
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 11:53 PM
such intense imagery GW - love the descriptive write:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2019 at 11:10 AM
Ooh! Intense! Interesting comment, as I had this in mind for a whole day (plus) before writing it, so I guess I was just bursting with intensity (LOL) to get the words out. (Couldn't write on the holiday Monday or Tuesday). Thank you so much for the encouragement, Jan! Warmest wishes, Gershon
May Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:13 PM
Gershon, do you know how many words I had to look up, lol Excellent my friend!!
Wolf Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:21 PM
I do know how many you looked up. Let's see: how many words were in that poem now... Hmm... LOL.... Bobby: I got all of these words from a couple of your poems. Where else would I get them, my friend?! Best wishes, Brother B!! :) 'G'
Romios Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Can I visit now. Sounds so inviting. I like your imagism. PR
Wolf Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Ooh. I so very much appreciated your spirited comment on this imagism-effort. Thanks a million, Panagiota! Cheers, Gershon
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