Brilliant Beauty

#0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson
Audrey Carey


Raw energy....
Her brilliant beauty rides the skies
Quick as the wink of an eye

Creating shadows, all exposed
Traveling thousands of miles in seconds

Bolts like tentacles
Designing patterns unique
Leaps, splits and burns indiscreet 

No mercy she shows
To man, beast or plants
Sparks and smoke left in her trail

Moving forward wherever she wills
Destruction lies within her path

Man harvests her power
As he tames a beast
An extraordinary feat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 4:55 PM
Congrad's to you & Audrey...very very nice work! Light & Love
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March 16, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Jimmy, this is a wonderful co-write and I wish you and Audrey success in the challenge. Awesome writing. Bravo to both of you! Love, Carolyn
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March 15, 2010 at 11:04 PM
Audrey Carrie is a special lady indeed..and wonderful poetess,so are you..Charma
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