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Brilliant Beauty

#0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson Audrey Carey Raw energy.... Her brilliant beauty rides the skies Quick as the wink of an eye Creating shadows, all exposed Traveling thousands of miles in seconds Bolts like tentacles Designing patterns unique Leaps, splits and burns indiscreet No mercy she shows To man, beast or plants Sparks and smoke left in her trail Moving forward wherever she wills Destruction lies within her path Man harvests her power As he tames a beast An extraordinary feat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/18/2010 4:55:00 PM
Congrad's to you & Audrey...very very nice work! Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:02:00 PM
Jimmy, this is a wonderful co-write and I wish you and Audrey success in the challenge. Awesome writing. Bravo to both of you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/15/2010 11:04:00 PM
Audrey Carrie is a special lady indeed..and wonderful poetess,so are you..Charma
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