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Image result for pictures of day break casting blush pink onto steel gray clouds over a creek

brilliance

first light's brilliance sun casts blush onto steel-gray .... creek echoes hounds' bark
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Squirrel Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 10:10 AM
This magically sent me straight to childhood... soft mud and oak trees... thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 11:23 AM
Glad it was magical read for you, Gary. Your comments are uplifting. Sara K
Kerr Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 6:19 AM
Sara, An impressionistic image rich painting in verse. This is an absolute joy to absorb and behold Extraordinary I say Howard
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Imagine that, Howard. I delight in seeing impressionistic art and gardens. I am glad that I managed to transfer that into my writing. Thanks for the kind review and uplifting remarks. Sara K
George Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 9:06 PM
Beautiful haiku on dawn. Have a happy Sunday !
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 3:43 AM
Ahhh!! A happy Sunday to you also, Valsa. I hope that you had or have a nice dawn. Not quite dawn here yet that was written on Saturday, I think. It could have been on Friday..LOL..Memory fails me. Sara K
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October 4, 2025 at 5:26 PM
I liked the imagery of this Haiku, Sara K. Although short, I felt as if you captured a moment in time and then shared it. Well done, hugs, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Why, thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the thoughtful review. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 1:56 PM
A beautiful write for a beautiful picture. Love Both... I love to see pink in the sky. Have a Blessed weekend writing away..........
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 3:33 PM
Thank you, Paula. I hope your weekend is nice and profitable as well. Sara K
Sharma Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:29 AM
A beautiful morning scene......
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October 4, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Why, thank you, Dr. Vandana. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Sara K
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