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Bolstered by faith in the path of ethical karma Indeed, I am grateful for my parents guidance. Imparting and intercepting a pragmatic dogma. Do graceful deeds or such will Deity reliance. Spirituality is a means of achieving mental tranquility. In place of admonishing compliance, cultivate trust. Sincerity is comparable to a yearning for faith in divinity. Religion is a system of holy books that tends to thrust. Only with insight, I grasp how to do proper deeds In the vicinity of oughts, givens, and plight sermons Making me a "polite person" in other peoples minds Hoping to target heaven by valuable fine actions. My self-motivation restrained my capability. It's all exhilarating to uncover the finest route. It may elicit widespread anxiety and uncertainty. Hell's ferocity will bind one to remain celibate. While challenging the status quo of religion. There is a constant desire for truth amid Deity. When I was in anguish, I wanted reconciliation. Attempting to cross the contradictory topography. Now that via my Faiths avail, I am all paradise. Ardent deal man's religious faith in helpful actions. I have given life with true love sealed as a prize. Granted their ability to taste heaven attractions. I am now all heaven, thanks to god generosity. A large deal of man's beliefs is seen in deeds. I have offered life as a prize for a sense of loyalty. They had given the power to savor heaven's seeds. Spirituality provides the claims that traditions claim. That is the idea that my heart strives for in the story. To adore God, that I have vowed to the Lords name. I put my trust in God's forgiveness, famous mercy.
Placed First on the contest written May 7, 2021 All Yours(Jun 8) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/16/2021 6:09:00 AM
Back with congrats with your winner in Brian's contest. Sara
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Date: 6/11/2021 8:48:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful story/write and picture. Love your ending, "I put my trust in God's forgiveness, famous mercy." Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 6/9/2021 4:00:00 AM
A good faith based winning work. I really like your last two lines that make the work a personal testimony. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2021 3:46:00 PM
Lasaad, this is a moving testimony of your seeking for truth and finding faith. Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:03:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Kim, appreciate your very kind words, I value your courteous visit and insightful comment. Have a blessed and safe evening.
Date: 6/8/2021 1:54:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 6/8/2021 3:26:00 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis; that means a lot to me. You have always been the first to find out about the contests and congratulate me. Appreciate your kindness. have a blessed and safe evening.
Date: 6/8/2021 10:48:00 AM
Your faith shines through in your beautifully written verse Lasaad Tom
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Date: 6/8/2021 12:46:00 PM
Thanks, dear Tom, appreciate your reading and commenting, I'm so delighted by your kind words. Hope you doing good. Blessings and best regards
Date: 6/8/2021 9:46:00 AM
WoW! Lasaad, You penned such a well-written introspection on life. Your last stanza sums up your spiritual verse well. Have a great, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:49:00 AM
You are at peace my friend. This is a deep introspection. Kudos for a life well lived.
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Date: 6/8/2021 5:04:00 AM
Dear friend Vijay, I value your courteous visit and insightful comment; your kind words always add charm to my page Blessings and warm regards.
Date: 6/8/2021 4:48:00 AM
A hymn of a grateful soul toward the divine written in humility and thankfulness! Superb work, my dearest friend, Lasaad. May the good Lord always guide you on the path of his truth! Be blessed.
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Date: 6/8/2021 5:01:00 AM
Dear friend Demetrios, I appreciate your considerate visit and enlightening comment; your kind words always add beauty to my work. Blessings and warm regards
Date: 6/7/2021 11:22:00 PM
Your last line says it all. Your poetry gets better every day. Well done.
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting Victor, I appreciate your kind words and support. Have a blessed day, my best regards.
Date: 6/7/2021 10:13:00 PM
Trust in the almighty our guiding light epic peace here my friend
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:12:00 AM
So true. Thanks for reading and commenting, David,
Date: 6/7/2021 6:57:00 PM
"NOT BY MIGHT, NOR BY POWER, BUT BY MY SPIRIT SAITH THE LORD OF HOSTS." Zechariah 4:6 A fine write my friend, God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/7/2021 7:38:00 PM
Thanks for your great Visit Judy and for commenting, have a wonderful evening. Blessings and Best regards

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