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Brighter Forecast

Grey clouds slow streamed across a dark sky line Day then was when I gleaned a clearer sign Way through the dark redeemed to brightening shine Ray beams that cleaned my vision now benign Play warm on harvest reamed to sweeter wine May light a world I dreamed of future fine

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Joe Dimino

Date: 8/26/2020 5:40:00 AM

Beautiful writing my friend; for sure, we must first image, will a better world and future, for it to become our living reality. Love this gem!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/15/2020 2:31:00 PM

I love how your muse guides through darkness to hope Geoffrey. A beautiful message. Congratulations on your win! Blessings :)

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/15/2020 4:41:00 PM

Thank you for your detailed and kind comments, Aditi.

James Inman

Date: 7/13/2020 7:21:00 PM

Nice write Geoffrey.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/15/2020 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, James.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 2:57:00 AM

Hearty expressions, Geoffrey, on this challenging quest, my compliments truly on your win, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/15/2020 4:37:00 PM

Thank you very much,William.

John Watt

Date: 7/11/2020 1:50:00 PM

Geoffrey, I love how your darkness resolves to light at the end, as your dreams of the future unfold. Excellent triple rhyme and congrats on your win in the contest ~ John

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/11/2020 3:48:00 PM

Thank you for your kind and expressive comments, John

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/11/2020 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning lines, Geoffrey.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 9/11/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Jenna

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/6/2020 12:17:00 AM

This is the first time I saw the “triple rhyme”. I like it but do not feel I can rise to this challenge. Thank you for penning this one.

Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 7/6/2020 8:42:00 AM

Thank you, Caren. This was a one off response to the challenge, probably never to be repeated.