Geoffrey Brewer Poet Rhyme

Brighter Forecast

Grey clouds slow streamed across a dark sky line
Day then was when I gleaned  a clearer sign
Way through the dark redeemed to brightening shine
Ray beams that cleaned my vision now benign
Play warm on harvest reamed to sweeter wine
May light a world I dreamed of future fine

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Joseph P. DiMino August 26, 2020 at 5:40 AM Beautiful writing my friend; for sure, we must first image, will a better world and future, for it to become our living reality. Love this gem!

Aditi Mishra July 15, 2020 at 2:31 PM I love how your muse guides through darkness to hope Geoffrey. A beautiful message. Congratulations on your win! Blessings :) Geoffrey Brewer July 15, 2020 at 4:41 PM Thank you for your detailed and kind comments, Aditi.

James Inman July 13, 2020 at 7:21 PM Nice write Geoffrey. Geoffrey Brewer July 15, 2020 at 4:38 PM Thanks, James.

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 2:57 AM Hearty expressions, Geoffrey, on this challenging quest, my compliments truly on your win, my friend -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Geoffrey Brewer July 15, 2020 at 4:37 PM Thank you very much,William.

John Watt July 11, 2020 at 1:50 PM Geoffrey, I love how your darkness resolves to light at the end, as your dreams of the future unfold. Excellent triple rhyme and congrats on your win in the contest ~ John Geoffrey Brewer July 11, 2020 at 3:48 PM Thank you for your kind and expressive comments, John

Jenna Logan July 11, 2020 at 8:28 AM Congratulations on your winning lines, Geoffrey. Geoffrey Brewer September 11, 2020 at 8:26 AM Thank you, Jenna

Caren Krutsinger July 6, 2020 at 12:17 AM This is the first time I saw the “triple rhyme”. I like it but do not feel I can rise to this challenge. Thank you for penning this one. Geoffrey Brewer July 6, 2020 at 8:42 AM Thank you, Caren. This was a one off response to the challenge, probably never to be repeated.