Brighter

As the Son gets bright
Bright, brighter; Darkness slowly
Fades, dissipates
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 10:31 AM
A Wonderful tribute to the Son of suns. Yet brighter than the fire ball we see in the sky. Beautiful piece Sara. Sincerely, love, Moses
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November 14, 2009 at 12:08 PM
good one
Fraser Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Kool Senyru Sara, its certainly well received going by the comments >> James
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November 13, 2009 at 3:09 PM
So very true, Sara, and so profound... excellent words... as always ... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today... also.. your tribute poem has just been posted... enjoy.... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 13, 2009 at 12:45 PM
Lovely and true Senryu :) ~harvest being that the Aspen trees turn their colors during the months of Sept Oct, they say best viewed mid september (harvest I thought sounded good lol). Green to Gold to Reds :)
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November 13, 2009 at 7:34 AM
One for my favourites Sara.Excellent senryu.Like the allsusion as well.Rgds Brian
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November 13, 2009 at 7:08 AM
A lovely vision Sara. Love Light Patty
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November 13, 2009 at 5:39 AM
The whole truth and nothing but the truth in so few words... excellent!!! Love to you, Sara. Smiling, Dane Ann
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