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As the Son gets bright Bright, brighter; Darkness slowly Fades, dissipates

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 11/16/2009 10:31:00 AM
A Wonderful tribute to the Son of suns. Yet brighter than the fire ball we see in the sky. Beautiful piece Sara. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 11/14/2009 12:08:00 PM
good one
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Date: 11/13/2009 3:25:00 PM
Kool Senyru Sara, its certainly well received going by the comments >> James
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Date: 11/13/2009 3:09:00 PM
So very true, Sara, and so profound... excellent words... as always ... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today... also.. your tribute poem has just been posted... enjoy.... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/13/2009 12:45:00 PM
Lovely and true Senryu :) ~harvest being that the Aspen trees turn their colors during the months of Sept Oct, they say best viewed mid september (harvest I thought sounded good lol). Green to Gold to Reds :)
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Date: 11/13/2009 7:34:00 AM
One for my favourites Sara.Excellent senryu.Like the allsusion as well.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/13/2009 7:08:00 AM
A lovely vision Sara. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/13/2009 5:39:00 AM
The whole truth and nothing but the truth in so few words... excellent!!! Love to you, Sara. Smiling, Dane Ann
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