Notes About The Poem

A few weeks ago I noticed that the nest built right above the lights for our cars' garage had been occupied by some new little baby birds. I can just barely see their little eyes peering down from the nest. My husband does not want to ruin their home, so he has postponed changing the light bulbs in those lamps above which the nest was built.

Recently I've been seeing great activity. And I hear sweet chirping when I get out of my car. I don't know what is going on for sure. There are two small birds (by googling it, I think they are barn swallows) that keep flying around. They swoop very close to me sometimes. I thought perhaps they were the new ones learning to fly. But now I think they are the parents because I see the top of the head of one of the birdlings still just sitting up there calmly in the nest. In the poem, I imagine this little one waking to his parents' song each morning and wondering about the world he is about to see. I sure love seeing these birds each day! Sure wish they were as excited to see me!!

 

Bright World: a Bird's-Eye View

A swallow with black iridescent wings am I! My wings in sunlight shimmer blue. I snuggle in my nest while mother sings and wakes the world.; it’s all so bright and new. I peek out from my nest. Below I see a host of roses - yellow, red and pink. They beam with beauty as they call to me, “Come out and see the sun about to sink behind bronzed mountains’ snow-white peaks. Its hue will be rose-violet! Soar from your nest above green lawns to white-foam clouds and view from azure skies. . . Earth’s colors at their best!” Farewell to merely peeking at this world. I’m flying with my shiny wings unfurled!
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Watt Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 12:59 AM
This is such an endearing, charming sonnet from a baby bird's POV with the world bright and new and colorful. Sweet interaction between mother and baby, too. Love this, as I do all your sonnets, you have a special gift.
Gasun Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 6:03 AM
My warm congratulations on your many SUPER WINs, friend. You're really a GREAT poet! I love painting and I love this poem of yours soooo much!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:15 PM
A belated congrats on your colorful win, Andrea! I love to see baby birds in their nest, but like you, I hate getting attacked by their parents! I enjoyed the poem and story behind it. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
July 27, 2012 at 9:15 AM
You have painted a picture that makes me smile! And loved reading your "About this poem" true account of the birds above your garage. WE have several nests every spring....they make me so happy to watch them grow until they fly away!
Merryman Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 6:34 PM
This is wonderful, Andrea. I love your use of personification. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Harrington Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:49 PM
A beautiful, inspired write Andrea. Congrats on your win with this lovely poem. :) Tanya
Guzzi Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Just love this Andie nd the use of enjambment is cool, Dee's given you the bug! Congrad's on your BIG win. Light & love
Kearley Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea! I can see all the colors so vividly as I read... :o)
Burch Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 9:53 AM
:) Big Congrats on your win Andrea!! such a lovely sonnet!!! says sooo much...love ya, deb
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 9:08 AM
congrats Andrea on a remarkable write and win luv full of glorious color..
Song Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 7:30 AM
Andrea...a sonnet was the perfect choice for this entry...the inspiration behind it also amuses me...your bird's eye view to invite others to adore the sinking sun is grand! Just grand! Wish I could come up with a scene like this! Impressive gal! gwendolen
Williams Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 4:37 AM
Andrea congrats on your win, I remember this one, love swallows..David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 3:09 AM
Beautiful Andy what a great idea a birds eye view,congratulations on your win xx
Beck Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 2:54 AM
yes -- very good portrayal of the "about thispoem' reality....birds always have an irresistibe charm...they are the inspir behind lots of me own poems.....well done Andrea...congrats for a well deserved placing.....best w ....Syd
Babcock Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 12:09 AM
An excellent poem Andrea. You are my last one tonight as it is after mid night and way past my bedtime. love phyl
Rozario Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 8:30 AM
LOVE THIS!!!.....no doubt a winner!!!
Gooden Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 8:26 PM
Appealing poetry, Andrea.
Devnath  Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Really your poem touched my heart. I thank to your lovely husband because he helped the birds and saved their family. Wonderful expression of the bright World which really is. Best wishes to you. Loved always, bl
Horne Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 11:36 AM
beautiful sonnet, my friend - you've really got under the bird's feathers : )
Palmer Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 5:34 PM
love it,great write Andrea
B Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 9:12 PM
Not hard to see the world from a brighter view with the freedom this winged beauty enjoys. You really capture the essence of that, and the sensation of taking in the grandeur of nature from a winged journey. Thanks for sharing!
Bordner Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Brave innocence, brave innocence - let us put Life to good use - Andrea, you've got powerful imagination - J.A.B.TYET
Johnson Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 3:57 PM
We wake up in the morning wanting only to find love. We look out in the meadow and we see the morning dove. The answer came upon it's wings. Reminding us of God's sweet love each time we hear it sing.
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July 19, 2012 at 2:27 AM
Andrea, your entry is awesome..Tracie will enjoy it...xox~pd
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