Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Other

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- Bright Stars -

look up at the skies
                                  the diamonds on black velvet -
                                           enchanting beauty

                                           with a royal view
                                      universe sublime aspects -
                                       touched a twinkling star

                                          mixed in ecstasy
                                      if i could only catch one -
                                          in bed at midnight

                                           to ascend the sky
                                 moon guards the treasure as gold -
                                           prayer of twilight


                                     quiet dreams under the sky -
                                     that night a star fell nearby



                                               30.05.2023
                                        Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                    Haiku Sonnet Poetry Contest
                                    Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel
                                        2nd place in the contest

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Anonomus Scorpio June 27, 2023 at 3:47 PM Hello my fellow star gazer :) "quiet dreams under the sky - that night a star fell nearby" Not too many can make me swoon in just one line but this is fav worthy all by itself...With Warmth A.S.

Terry Miller June 14, 2023 at 2:02 AM Oh, this is beautiful, such imagery, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2023 at 4:48 PM Diamond stars on black velvet…so pretty!

Sotto Poet June 13, 2023 at 4:15 AM Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise, your poem was so charming

Joanna Daniel June 13, 2023 at 1:27 AM Magical and dreamy, Anne-Lise, congratulations:)

Robert Lindley June 5, 2023 at 10:42 AM A star embossed spectacled view inked in fine poetic verses my friend. Very fine poetry. A fav.. Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 12:20 PM - Many thanks for your comment and the fave, Robert :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose June 1, 2023 at 5:16 PM You have created such beautiful magic, love it, gl in the contest Anne :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Alexis Y. June 1, 2023 at 5:35 AM WoW! Anne-Lise, This is just beautiful! I enjoyed the view. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 12:19 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Alexis :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf May 31, 2023 at 6:55 PM a truly sublime and sweet dream-wish, Anne-Lise. Painting of gold. :) gw Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 12:18 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Gershon :) - hugs

Valsa George May 31, 2023 at 9:09 AM A star studded night is a marvel of creation, an arresting spectacle and a joy to view. You have beautifully pictured the night sky in shining images! All the Best dear Ann. Hugs ... Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2023 at 12:18 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar May 31, 2023 at 2:06 AM Enchanting and beautiful. Great poem and picture. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2023 at 8:56 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham May 30, 2023 at 3:33 PM Nothing beats the night sky on a clear night, I bet they look amazing where you live. Good luck in the contest Anne Lise. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2023 at 8:56 AM - They look amazing no matter where you live, Tom :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit May 30, 2023 at 2:51 PM Charming hues of magical stars, Anne-Lise. A beautiful ending--quiet dreams under the sky - that night a star fell nearby... Anne-Lise Andresen May 31, 2023 at 8:54 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Vijay :) - hugs