Bright Star

Close those weary eyes and drift afar 
Fly up high and you’ll reach the brightest star

Floating on up to that magic place
Shooting stars are helping you through space

You ride on and drink from the milky way
Creamy and fluffy, fills you for the end of the day

Saturn rings with bite marks taken out
The universe a sweet shop, no kid goes without

The Planet Dreamland is our next visit
So hop on board the one way Banana split

Running your little fingers through cosmic mist
Swirls of gems thrown up and you’re sun kissed

So close those weary eyes……and dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 4, 2010 at 5:38 AM
The world is built on dreams, and long may it continue this way, nice piece Gareth >> James
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM
Happy Easter to you and yours Gareth. Love Carol and Family
Murphy Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 1:16 PM
very nice hope for contest if so good luck faleshia
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