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Bright Sight

Did this bright new poem encourage me to use my brand-new pen? Or did this brand-new pen encourage me to write a bright new poem? Did seeing your bright smiling face bring me so much joy? Or did the sight of joy in my eyes cause the bright smile in your face? Oh, which way, which way? (26 May 2003)

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Date: 6/2/2023 1:07:00 PM
Yes, yes, yes, yes! Last way: every which way but loose ;)
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Andrew John
Date: 6/3/2023 1:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim.
Date: 5/30/2023 6:21:00 AM
Either way it generated happiness Andrew…Ha! Enjoyed this poem! Debx
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Andrew John
Date: 5/31/2023 5:15:00 AM
Thanks, Deb. Nice to hear from you.
Date: 5/26/2023 8:12:00 AM
I like this one Andrew. A new pen never failes to inspire and when it does it is all possible.
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Andrew John
Date: 5/27/2023 2:23:00 AM
Many thanks for this comment, DW.

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