Andrew John Poet Free verse

Bright Sight

Did this bright new poem encourage me
to use my brand-new pen?
Or did this brand-new pen encourage me
to write a bright new poem?

Did seeing your bright smiling face
bring me so much joy?
Or did the sight of joy in my eyes
cause the bright smile in your face?

Oh, which way, which way?


(26 May 2003)

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Kim Rodrigues June 2, 2023 at 1:07 PM Yes, yes, yes, yes! Last way: every which way but loose ;) Andrew John June 3, 2023 at 1:23 AM Thanks so much, Kim.

Deb M May 30, 2023 at 6:21 AM Either way it generated happiness Andrew…Ha! Enjoyed this poem! Debx Andrew John May 31, 2023 at 5:15 AM Thanks, Deb. Nice to hear from you.

Diy Writes May 26, 2023 at 8:12 AM I like this one Andrew. A new pen never failes to inspire and when it does it is all possible. Andrew John May 27, 2023 at 2:23 AM Many thanks for this comment, DW.