Bright Side

I feel so cold, what can I say?,
I’m freezing, been shivering all day.
Too cold or too hot, never in between,
Am I sick or not, this remains to be seen.
I'm so tired I just wanna sleep,
I feel dead like a zombie.
My head hurts so bad today,
So many issues I cant explain.
Shaking so bad I can barely see straight,
Where exactly am I going at this rate?
Always too cold always too hot never in between,
Am I sick or not, still remains unknown to me.
None the less... I must focus on the bright sides,
Look forward to the lights of my life.
My loving man and teaching to excitedly endure,
Kids to brighten my days, and them to be so pure.
I cannot wait for this blessing to be,
If only a teacher, I'd still be happy.
Never mind this coldness I’m going through,
I have better things to look forward to.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/6/2019 2:04:00 AM
Zoombie..... God right? Cursed for being smart hated for not fitting in. Looked as crazy and I am first to tell you my cheese slid off my cracker a long time ago. You use poetry, I connect to people that treat me human. I listen and try to fix. And sometimes I don't know I helped. But at least I tried in the beginning and didn't abandon. But somedays...I feel like a zombie.
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:14:00 AM
may there always be better things for you and less headaches
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