Bright Shinning Stars

I can see your shooting star, 
It tells me all of who you are. 
The sky so vast, the moon so bright,
I look up and my mind takes flight.

My ears start to hear,
The whispers that come from beneath.
Will I get to hear
The souls not yet unleashed?

Again appear the nightly stars.
They seem so close to touch.
But still so far away..
That Dream is yet to come true.
And will repeat in the open minded.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 6, 2010 at 4:04 AM
A nice imaginative poem with nice thoughts
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