Bright Miracle

BRIGHT    MIRACLE

Snow is my dream-home miracle,
Always called to me,   never  cold. 
Serene, soft, silent,
Soul-scoured, fresh, reposing -
Like the sound and pure spray  
Of  flowing water over a low  weir. 
White tabula rasa submerging 
Hard sharp corners;  edges are softened.
World suddenly transformed, renewed, unspoiled:
Long-sought Eden garden
From the child-dreams I was forbidden to enter
By the guards:  the teachers, the church, the grandma, 
And other cold dark forces
Choking   my green growth.
Dowdy fields,  old trees, and dirty walls  - 
Freshly-baptised  converts to pure brightness:
Industrial dumps, rusted hulks, 
Row upon row of soulless cellars, 
In a mantle white  from  the fairytale shapes 
Of a Dickens scene on a Christmas card.
I feel small  again in snow,    always did:
Impossible become possible:  childhood regained.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 17, 2011 at 3:09 PM
It's Spring and now you make me miss the warm snow of a Charles Dicken's scene. Nice! Great poem Gwendolen
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March 17, 2011 at 9:06 AM
Regarding the snow, Syd, you have had perhaps too much of a good thing, but I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Love, Carolyn
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March 17, 2011 at 8:54 AM
So many people complain about the snow, Syd, but you and I have something in common. I love the way it creates such a sense of serenity, painting everything pristine white. We don't see much of it in Florida -- none at all this year -- but I bet you enjoyed some great snowfalls this winter! Love, Carolyn
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March 15, 2011 at 10:42 AM
the innocence of one's heart overflows in this piece as if to detect if whatever is left remain pure still...syd, a one in a million piece.. that's why i know it;s mine, lol wow! :) huggs!
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