Bright Lights

at dawn's first

 light*******

the radiance
is blinding to
my eye sight
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Austin Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 5:06 PM
Good to hear from you, Deneen, Time to get going on the soup again. LOve, daver
Stella Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 12:08 PM
boy you got this right the morning sun makes me sneeze for some reason enjoyed this read and write also thankls for your comments on my poems I will be back to give ya more just trying to get back on saddle here in soup keep up the great writing
Fraser Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Nature gives us so many wonderful sights, breathtaking are many of them >> lovely Haiku >> James
Fraser Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Nature gives us so many wonderful sights, breathtaking are many of them >> lovely Haiku >> James
Lokken Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 10:41 AM
Yes, it is. Very beautiful....Love, Sara
Strand Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 11:54 PM
Like it especially th presentationD-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
Kendrick Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Nicely done Haiku that should do well. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Babcock Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 7:54 PM
A great Haiku. God Bless Phyl
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