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Bright Lights

at dawn's first light******* the radiance is blinding to my eye sight **********

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/21/2011 5:06:00 PM

Good to hear from you, Deneen, Time to get going on the soup again. LOve, daver

Katherine Stella

Date: 9/18/2010 12:08:00 PM

boy you got this right the morning sun makes me sneeze for some reason enjoyed this read and write also thankls for your comments on my poems I will be back to give ya more just trying to get back on saddle here in soup keep up the great writing

James Fraser

Date: 3/21/2010 4:04:00 PM

Nature gives us so many wonderful sights, breathtaking are many of them >> lovely Haiku >> James

James Fraser

Date: 3/21/2010 4:04:00 PM

Nature gives us so many wonderful sights, breathtaking are many of them >> lovely Haiku >> James

Sara Lokken

Date: 12/26/2009 10:41:00 AM

Yes, it is. Very beautiful....Love, Sara

Brian Strand

Date: 11/19/2009 11:54:00 PM

Like it especially th presentationD-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2009 4:50:00 PM

Nicely done Haiku that should do well. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/18/2009 7:54:00 PM

A great Haiku. God Bless Phyl