Bright Light

the wick is gently 
lit
the flame staggers
at first
then stands up
straight
reaching up
fully bright

the wax wanes
the flame sputters
the wick disappears
leaving a lasting
memory
of the bright light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 11:38 AM
Lovely poem with great description - I can relate to this write as I love scented candles burning in my lounge:-) Hugs jan xx
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