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Bright Jack, the Maniac

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Our sweet, all white cat Snowball had ten kittens! Goodbye to Zen. Each one a different color, some muted gray, or ginger, and some multi-color; and one was all black, and a real little jumping jack. When the time came for adoption they were in a playpen, and people came time and again. First, adopted were the bright cats with fur technicolor, and the cats in muted watercolor. But, on each visit the black cat hung back, then, when we were alone he was a maniac. And then, there was only him and a ginger in the pen, but ginger said goodbye one day, and then there were no more bright cats multi-color and no more cats technicolor or watercolor. Just one little bright-eyed maniac black, that I kept and named Jack . . . I keep my Jack close, when out, 'cause people can be mean every now and then. ________________________ January 7, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Bright Jack, The Maniac Copyright Protected, ID 18-9807-76-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. For the contest,There is a Brighter Side sponsor, Eve Roper First Place Inspired by image #2 Rhyme Pattern - aabbccaabbccaabbccaa- 20 lines Rhyming verified on Rhymezone.

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Date: 1/29/2018 5:37:00 PM
what a sweet poem Constance i knew you would choose this picture:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:15:00 PM
How sweeet. Very well penned. Congrats on your first place finish, BW.
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Date: 1/29/2018 10:25:00 AM
Sweet ink lovely! Congratulations on your top win! xomo
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Date: 1/29/2018 9:47:00 AM
See, black cats are lucky ;-) Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings... Hugs... Mick
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Date: 1/28/2018 9:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/8/2018 7:02:00 AM
Awww...such a sweet, sad write with an awesome happy ending. Did you know its a fact that black animals have a tough time getting adopted at an animal shelter? That's what i thought of as I read this poem. Good luck in the contest. Well written.
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