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Bright Diamond Glow

Romance for me went full throttle
with the appearance of a handsome gent
when I was on the verge of womanhood.
Nothing on earth could match the shine
of romance when it is at its finest.
How I'd like to have captured the feeling
and kept it in a bottle,
and each time I wanted to relive it,
I'd unscrew the lid to the bottle
that retained that incredible feeling.
I'd hold it to my cheek and inhale with joy
its bright diamond glow.

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Date: 6/18/2023 9:04:00 AM
Interesting. Your choice of words is unique. The suttle rhyme of bottle and throttle accents this lovely poem. Thanks for sharing..................peace!
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Date: 6/14/2023 7:07:00 AM
how touching is this poem, enjoyed the images ( bottle etc....) thanks
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Date: 6/13/2023 1:57:00 AM
Oh! If only we could bottle such moments in time! wonderful:)
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Date: 6/12/2023 3:48:00 AM
These thoughts are unique. Well done. Hugs
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Date: 6/11/2023 11:48:00 AM
Those feelings are so real a shame you can't preserve them forever. Tom
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Date: 6/11/2023 10:32:00 AM
Some memories are very special. A sweet poem on treasured love.
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