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bright

bright red sunrise
lends fuchsia to blue sky....
stillness in air
soon sun will heat earth
a hot middle september day

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 7, 2026 at 4:58 AM

- A lovely September morning, Sara :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

September 24, 2026 at 5:56 PM

Lovely, dear poet!

Sara Kendrick

September 25, 2026 at 4:51 AM

Kim, your visit is uplifting. Your time spent here is appreciated. Sara K. 👍

sara Etgen-Baker

September 17, 2026 at 4:40 PM

the heat here in Texas doesn't leave...we've lived in a 'heat dome' that's centered on our part of Texas...even night is hot....hurry fall!

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2026 at 4:57 PM

I totally understand but we have been better here than what I see and hear on the news that they are saying of Texas' heat. I agree, Sara B., I am looking forward to fall and we had a touch a few days this week but it is coming back starting tomorrow but not as bad as over a hundred degrees though. Thank you for the visit. .👍⭐. Sara K.

Valsa George

September 17, 2026 at 9:26 AM

Sun is already heating this part of the globe where l live. The temperature is escalating unprecedentedly. Beautiful image and beautiful tanka.

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2026 at 4:59 PM

Valsa, you live where when we have summer you are experiencing winter? Or is it hot most of the time where you live? Thank you for your visit. .👍⭐. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich

September 17, 2026 at 1:31 AM

Great little September poem here! Gosh. Already the month is half over!!

Sara Kendrick

September 17, 2026 at 5:31 AM

The days seem to fly, and the grandchildren are growing up and getting older as are the great granddaughters. I hope this is a great day for you. Sara K. 👍⭐