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Before the butterfly house opens, I’ve spotted a beautiful butterfly.

briefly butterfly set free from its enclosure quietude of wings glorious rainbow flutters under the green Summer leaves 6/28/2018

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Date: 6/29/2018 12:08:00 PM
A hail to freedom and beauty! An impressive Tanka Kim! A joy to read. Stay blessed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/29/2018 4:51:00 PM
Blessings, Besma! Thank you!
Date: 6/28/2018 11:32:00 AM
butterfly, the enigma of nature...an excellent tanka.Rank A in my mind for the poem. Hugs.> Rajat
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thanks, Rajat!
Date: 6/28/2018 10:55:00 AM
Butterflies may be brief but they show know how to make a lasting impression on nature lovers such as you and I, thanks for sharing Kim. Have a great day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2018 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, Pixie Dust!
Date: 6/28/2018 8:32:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2018 10:43:00 AM
Thanks, line!
Date: 6/28/2018 8:24:00 AM
Heavenly imagery dearest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/28/2018 7:11:00 AM
I loved this one Kim, perfect read for a summer morn!! Happy Thursday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Date: 6/28/2018 7:10:00 AM
Lovely <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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